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A young man discovers that the social food club to which his parents belong actually covers a very large, very sexy secret... and his world is changed forever.
Size: 108 KB (20,302 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Reluctant, Lesbian, BiSexual, Incest, Mother, Son, Brother, Sister, Rough, Swinging, Group Sex, Orgy, Interracial, Black Female, Black Male, White Male, White Female, Oriental Male, Oriental Female, Oral Sex, Cream Pie, Voyeurism, Foot Fetish

Review by Price26   [other reviews by Price26]

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The two ‘Cuisine Club’ stories form the beginning of what could have been a truly epic coming of age / swinging / incest saga. Sadly, they have been incomplete and inactive for ten years, and I get the feeling that Joe Mezza will never give us the rest of the story. That’s a crying shame.

Why do I say that? Well, the scenario that Joe Mezza has dreamed up is plausible, flexible and pretty damn erotic. 17-year-old twins who discover that in the years they’ve been minding the other younger kids down in the basement, their folks have been upstairs sampling more than just exotic cuisines. Their siblings and friends have already graduated from the basement to join the adult swinging party, and they are about to qualify for membership themselves.

Written from the point of view of a teenage boy looking back at events, it’s a well structured story with plenty of descriptive plot and character development, enough detail to make it erotic rather than straight porn, and a massive cast with huge potential for sub-plots. I love it, and I get something new from it each time I read it. It keeps drawing me back. Joe Mezza has invested a huge amount of time and effort in a truly satisfying level of detail.

The story is not perfect; with around 30 named characters, it can be pretty difficult to remember exactly who is who, although the author kindly keeps reminding the reader with little snippets. You may find the description of the game of ‘Tic-Tac-Blow’ a little repetitive, but keep going. There are a couple of very minor continuity points, and one or two small typos, but the prose is consistent and generally believable. There are a number of references to back stories, and I find these one of the most intriguing aspects of the tale. I just wish that Joe had posted a few more chapters!

I urge you to take a look and see if the ‘Cuisine Club’ floats your boat. Sadly, it’s currently ‘premier members only’, so for some of you it’s not going to be possible. The ‘much sex’ classification is difficult, parts are pure ‘stroke story’, but there’s enough narrative in between to probably justify it.

Full disclosure. I’ve spent a lot of time recently day-dreaming about where Joe was taking this, and I’ve got a few notes down on paper. I’m SO tempted to write a fan fiction possible ending to Joe’s series. I’ve tried to contact Joe to ask his blessing, but no trace yet. Although I generally don’t support finishing other peoples stories unless it’s part of an Invitational, this may be a challenge that I can’t resist.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


When you think of it, it seems completely natural that a seventeen year old lad would discover that his family and their friends would join together in a sexual free-for-all and accept him into their midst, and have his elder sister, and his divorced mother, and his stepmother, take practically all his virginities, and all the while his twin sister is asleep downstairs in the basement with all the other underaged kids, not realising what is going to happen on the twins eighteenth birthday!

And they borrowed from Las Vegas in that all that goes on at the party, stays at the party.

I cant wait for the next installment!!!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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