I was supposed to be out late, but my plans became cancelled. My sister was supposed to be home alone bored, but she was having a slumber party. Now I was stuck in my room bored and my sister was having fun with her two friends. My night didn't stay that way.
Size: 39 KB (7,436 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Fiction, Incest, Brother, Sister, First, Oral Sex
Review by Teloz [other reviews by Teloz]
Reviewed:
OK! It's stroke! Though for a blessed change it's well written stroke!
Technically excellent, leavened with enough humour to make the story interesting, it will bring a wry grin to your face, if not an outright guffaw! There's a gratifying lack of enormous cocks, and humongous tits, just-this-guy strikes just the right balance with Slumber Party it's a great little story!
Read, and enjoy!
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "Slumber Party", we have the story of a 16yr old boy who comes home early from a night out with a friend, and finds his 14yr old siser and 2 friends having an impomptu slumber party. One friend decides she's bored, and comes into the boy's room. Read along to find out what happens after.
The sex itself is not bad, but it isn't that intense. There is lots of quantity, but it's 16yr old quantity. The hot factor, to me, was the age of the participants and not the activities undertaken. It's good, but not great.
The plot itself was fairly simple, but it is a short story. There is enough there to get the party started, and that is all the story has room for.
Technically, the story is not bad, but there were some problems. Your instead of you're, and the like. It was simple errors that the author's own eye will never see.
Overall, this was a nice stroke piece. It has a lot of activity in it, and if you don't need your scenes to be scorching hot, this one should make for a good short stroke workout.
