The teen age son of the owners of the resort has to babysit the kids of the resort guests. What a real drag, except the kids are all teen age girls. This is a problem???
Size: 174 KB (34,408 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, Reluctant, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex
Review by The Black Knight [other reviews by The Black Knight]
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This story had some potential; it unfortunately didn't live up to it. The technical flaws, most of which should have been caught by an editor, dragged it down.
The plot itself was fairly basic: take a teenage guy, give him access to girls that are around for a limited time and are looking to get laid, and wait for the inevitable. Overall, it was a safe premise for a basic stroke story.
The characters, for the most part, were more caricatures than characters; whether this is a detriment to this type of story is a decision best left to the individual reader. Likewise, the dialog was often unrealistic, but the same disclaimer applies. However, the volume of technical errors was fairly high. The typos, incorrect tenses and so on were a major distraction.
Anyone who is looking for a basic stroke story and isn't too concerned with technical merit should like this story. Anyone else might find it worthwhile to take a pass on.
