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Author's Description:
He found out she was playing him.
Size: 43 KB (9,071 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Cheating, Slow

Review by fixitman8267   [other reviews by fixitman8267]

Reviewed:


People can be surprised at the many ways you can come across a great story. I found this little gem because of a review. Not all stories worth ready need to have sex in them just because they are on an adult website and this story is a good example. The main character just had his wife of ten years walk out on him. After learning the truth he sets out to even the score and the way he accomplishes it is just genius.

The author put a lot of thought into this story and worked each step, each event in such a way that they flowed smoothly. Then dropped and surprise ending. For a short story, I'd have to say this is one of the good ones. Most definitely worth reading.

I gave the plot a ten because it was an idea that struck close to home for me. I gave technical a 10 because he author did very well in editing and if there were any spelling or grammar error I didn't see them on the first read and the story flowed well. I thought the appeal to readers was pretty strong as well.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


In December of 2007, Just Plain Bob wrote an amazing story with all of the key points covered.

In Sticking It To Peggy, JPB’s leading man Rob is told by his “loving wife” that she was moving out, to be get away from him for a few months. They had drifted apart in the last several months, according to her.

The story gets complicated through out the rest of the tale. We have a strong loving steadfast husband Rob. A lying, cheating, deceitful wife Peggy, true friends in a loving couple Tom and Tanya who help to open Robs eyes to the situation.

This is one of the best stories written by Just Plain Bob that I have read, of his more than 750 that he has submitted here on SOL.

It is worth the effort in reading and enjoying from a true artist in this story of a cheating wife and the consequences.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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