They met on line; he was in his late forties, she was seventeen; they lived an ocean apart and both were just going through the motions of living. With all that against them a relationship between them could never work...could it? Except for the IM name, the first few paragraphs of this story are true. My imagination supplied the remainder. (Definitely not a stroke story.)
Size: 66 KB (12,496 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic
Review by BikeWriter [other reviews by BikeWriter]
Reviewed:
Aw! This is a most amazing love story about how love can overcome the obstacles of distance, language, and age between two kindred souls who find each other on the internet.
The characters are masterfully set before us. They kiss away the tears caused by their mutual misunderstandings. This is altogether a beautiful romance story, not a stroke story, but I hope it will be as pleasant for you as it was for me!
Review by Threesheets [other reviews by Threesheets]
Reviewed:
LostGirl is slightly lost. I could see the makings of a nice little love story. Older man/younger woman(girl) as a lot of folks would want a stroke by stroke pedophile story. This ain't it.
I feel it could be a lot more, more character building, and touch on some differences, cultural, age, distance. As it is, it ends up stopping rather abruptly after a first time love making that is not (thank goodness) descriptive. O am left feeling as if there should be more to follow.
The story is well written, the editing is top notch but it leaves something to be desired or calls to be completed.
