15 year old Angie loved to flirt. Especialy with adult men. The flirting got her in a very unwanted situation though. Being gang raped by a group of men.
Size: 16 KB (3,211 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Teenagers, Rape, Heterosexual, Fiction, Rough, Gang Bang, First, Size
Review by HighRiseWriter [other reviews by HighRiseWriter]
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Synopsis: 15 year old Angie loved to flirt. Especially with adult men. The flirting got her in a very unwanted situation though. Being gang raped by a group of men.
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The author Tinus has over 45 story submissions to SOL and this story is listed as his third. Therefore, I am going to assume that his writing will show a steady improvement and that his latest offerings will be some of his best work.
Keeping the above paragraph in mind, I have to say I was unsatisfied with 'Angie's Gang Rape'. The story seemed to be thrown together quickly and little or no editing was performed.
Tinus obviously has a vivid imagination and I am confident that will come out more in his later stories. Unfortunately, that imagination was overshadowed by awkward sentences and a general 'jerkiness' to the overall flow of the story.
I liked the way he described Angie's physical attributes and a scene where a certain part of her body was ripped open. In these paragraphs his narrative was brief but was able to draw a very vivid picture in my mind. If the rest of the story followed suit it would of been much more appealing.
With all that said, I still intend on reading more of the author's stories because 'Angie's Gang Rape' had just enough titillation to make this reader crave more.
