Billy was thirteen, maybe a little old for babysitters, but he really didn't mind. That was especially true when he met his latest sitter, a cute, athletic high-school girl with an interesting career choice.
Size: 48 KB (9,164 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, Heterosexual, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Size
Review by Jais Nereis [other reviews by Jais Nereis]
Reviewed:
“Billy’s Club” is a story after my own heart. It requires no small mount of willingness to suspend belief when we encounter the main character of this story, the precocious 13 year old Billy DuBois. The story opens as he’s meeting his new babysitter, a fresh 17 year old girl named Michelle. Which he regards as something akin to “…getting a birthday present.” And that little line is a big clue that we’re not in Kansas anymore.
To enjoy this story, first off, we need to accept the idea that Billy is by far and away the most sexually mature 13 year old you can imagine. Picture a 30 year old man living in a teenage boy’s body and we have Billy. Let’s make the man perverted, while we’re at it, and fixated on seducing his virgin babysitter. And if we’re willing to go that far, mmmm… Let’s give the boy a 10 inch penis just for good luck.
If you can nod your head at all that, well you’re ready for a pretty good story then.
What I liked, besides Billy’s Precocious Penis, was the small twist on seduction, for one thing. Usually it’s the older character in a teen seduction story that does the seducing. And Billy, being the rather perverted fellow he is, doesn’t spoil that for Michelle. He’s more than willing to let her think she’s seducing him. It’s the secret of his success, I’m sure. So it’s kind of a twist in twist, sorta…Young boy seduces older girl into seducing him…Is it just me, or does that not sound like a whole lot of fun?
The pace moves slowly in this story, but it isn’t plodding, it’s put to good use to establish the characters. Michelle is cute and fun in her resistance to Billy’s persistent curiosity about sex. She really does want to be the responsible babysitter and not abuse the boy, or frighten him with information he’s too young for. She comes across as a naïve and sexy teenage girl, a very sweet one and I like the character a lot.
Like most stories of this type, first time seduction stories, there’s the almost innocent exploration scene. A little sexy Q & A between Billy and his babysitter and I found it entertaining. It really builds the anticipation nicely for what we know is coming. And it is stereotypical porn of a type we see very often in stories of this sort, and so it always comes down to the writing, because there isn’t a whole lot of new territory to explore in these scenes.
Thankfully the writing is up to the challenge of taking a well-worn plot and turning it on its ear a little with some fun twists, some over-the-top exaggeration if you will, and real flair for telling an interesting story with well developed characters.
Is there any problems with it? I think the one thing that I wanted to see and didn’t was more gratuitous sex in the climactic sex scene. In plain terms, I wanted to see Michelle really taking everything Billy had to offer and loving every second of it. (And every inch of it!) I think once I was ready to believe enough to get to that point in the story, I was ready to believe anything. The author could have sold me the Eiffel Tower right about then and he didn’t take advantage of that, and boy I sure wanted him to!
In summary, “Billy’s Club” is a great story, full of pure escapist fun. Its a reality altering trip to a place some of us should definitely be living in, but we’re probably lucky we don’t, and I strongly urge you to give this story a look. Take your imagination out for a stroll; it’s one of those stories that will leave you smiling at the end of it.
~Jais Nereis~
Review by y2 [other reviews by y2]
Reviewed:
A well written, well paced story with a superb twist at the end. At a glance it is a simple story about a young boy entering into puberty; the twist at the end, makes it all the more interesting.
