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Author's Description:
It took me so long to find out, and I found out.
Size: 23 KB (4,523 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Heterosexual, Cheating

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


Nine innings! The district championship game is still tied after two extra innings after regulation, and now in the second overtime frame, Brook had tripled to lead off! Tim was watching his daughter on third. Brook slid to the back edge of the plate as the catcher brought the ball around for the tag. Harddaysknight has created an exciting dynamic to draw the reader into the story of 'Day Tripper,' a short story involving a father and a high school championship-winning daughter. We must not forget to mention the other parent, an insignificant cheating member of the family. The father, Tim, and daughter Brook celebrate the district championship at the Hilton, one of the best restaurants around.

Only once there, Brook discoverers her mother Natalie, who is supposed to be in Philadelphia, having dinner with some other man. After telling her father, Tim, she falls apart about what she has seen. She discovered Natalie's car in the parking lot as they left the restaurant. The story gets very vindictive from this point on. How do Tim and his daughter Brook react to Natalie cheating? Hardaysknight wrote an enticing tale of what happens when you get caught in a compromising position.

Day Tripper is a great little tale.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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