Reviewed:
What a nice little fantasy fulfilled. Starts out with a situation that is common to most of the people out there, and then takes it that little extra step farther.
The writing is really nice, and shows the uncertainty of a boys first time quite realistically. The embarrassment and fear are all very well written.
The characters are a little bit two dimensional, but that is to be expected in a piece this short. There is, however, opportunity for a continuation. I would enjoy that quite a bit.