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WRITTEN BY PHOEBE: A woman loses a bet and agrees to being tied naked and spread-eagled to a bed for the night in a dorm room at Arizona State University.
Size: 9 KB (1,747 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, BDSM

Review by Erik Thread   [other reviews by Erik Thread]

Reviewed:


What a little gem! A wonderful scene of rising emotions, of fear, anticipation, excitement, dread, of ache, relief, disappointment, of hope.

Michael & Phoebe have crafted a story that starts small, builds quickly, escalates to a surprising climax, and descends rapidly. An interesting exercise for a writer, but what is most wonderful for us is how they take us along with Lauren. She's the one tied, spread-eagle on the bed, blindfolded, gagged—voluntarily submitting to pay off a lost bet. But Michael & Phoebe have created a vision where the reader is drawn into Lauren's world and her experiences, into her fear, anguish, even her disappointment.

Read it. It'll take only a few minutes. But the image will stay with you for a long time.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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