It was my first time camping. I hated it. It was my first time for other things. I loved it.
Size: 18 KB (3,608 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, First
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
The first time for a young lad can be the most frustrating or the most romantic. This time romance gets the nod, and Melissa is the young possible virgin who surrenders her body willingly to our young hero on the last full day of their camping trip.
Now Ièm a sucker for a love story, and this is one; for it isnt often that a boys first time is such fun! Enjoy!
Review by mbeau [other reviews by mbeau]
Reviewed:
This is the ssecond story by just-this-guy that I have reviewed, but it is the first story he posted.
This story was, to me, not quite as interesting or catchy as "First Cake". I don't know why, but I suspect that it had to do with the speed of the encounters. The way that the story happens requires it to be told and separated the way it is. There is no long chronology, rather one encounter a day. It is very well written, however the style in which it is written (short encounters) turn me off a bit.
