Author's Description:
What happens when a man has to be the girl's gym teacher
Size: 75 KB (14,630 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


Now I keep writing about it, and I hope someone, somewhere, believes me; I'm a sucker for a truly nice sexy love story!

Poor old Mike, a novice teacher caught in the political crunch, forced to be a gym teacher of a girls department in a senior school. Can you imagine it! A young virile man plunged into a maelstrom of naked female teenagers flaunting their beautiful bodies in front of a poor teacher named Mike, standing there with a permanently erect penis ... well you must get the idea, or are they ready to bury you tomorrow?

Kerry is one of Mike's students, who rapidly falls in love with him, and after the consummation of their life together, about ten minutes after her towel falls off leaving her naked, and Bob and Kathy her parents decide that Mike is suitably good enough to be Kerry's lover/husband give their consent to all the shenanigans they expect from any suitor of their daughter's hand and all the other delicious parts attached thereto.

Enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Erik Thread   [other reviews by Erik Thread]

Reviewed:


Every boy's and every man's fantasy is to be a fly on the wall in the high school girls' gym. Well, Mike became just that... No, not really, actually he was appointed the coach for all the girls' physical education classes. Just as good as a fly on the wall, maybe better.

The girls were surprised when Coach Mike burst into their locker room. "But they only had two hands and three places to cover which left much on view, proving that if God had wished women to be modest he would have given women three hands," was Mike's commentary on his first foray into their midst.

And even though Mike had this every-male's-dream job, he was shy about it. "There was no place I could look that didn't have a girl in the line of sight except straight down or straight up. I noticed the ceiling in the girls' gym could use a coat of paint."

Rod O'Steele spent a considerable amount of time and effort to make this unlikely appointment seem somewhat realistic. Once over that hurdle, the story proceeded with blushes, uncomfortable moments, oodles of naked girls--just what I expected, a hot stroke story, well-written and enjoyable to read. With a shy, respectful, young male coach.

"Gym Teacher" is a fun stroke story, but it is also a romantic love story because Mike finds, despite all the teasing, exhibitionist girls (there were shy, always-hiding ones, too), an opportunity to give and to receive genuine love. "Happily ever after" could trailer onto the end.

Well-written, interesting vocabulary, good grammar and form, well-plotted with logical results from events (despite the fantastical premise); a very enjoyable read. However, the story almost divides into halves, a very hot stroke beginning with a less well-developed romantic conclusion.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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