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Shiloh is a land of plains, forests, and mountains on the planet Chaos. The planet's two most powerful Heroes are dead and the bureaucracy of the Crossroads control centre is more of a hindrance than a help, due to treachery within their ranks. Kyle Alexander is the heir to Jonas the powerful Lord of Shiloh, he must now take up his inheritance due to Jonas' unexpected death, and solve many problems while fighting enemies and protect his people on both Earth and Chaos. - 271,000 words
Size: 1423 KB (277,784 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Military, School, War, Workplace, Rags To Riches, Science Fiction, Aliens, Safe Sex, Politics, Slow, Violent

Review by Knight6   [other reviews by Knight6]

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This story is full of every possible thing you might find in a Damsel in Distress story. All the elements that make up a D.i.D. story are in this great one. I loved this story from when it first started posting and was thrilled with each additional posting, the “The Scot” fell ill and the postings dropped completely. I’m ever grateful to Ernest Bywater for picking up where “The Scot” left off. The writing is so seamless between the two if you hadn’t been reading from the beginning of its posting you wouldn’t know where one authors writing stopped and the others started. It’s been a bit of time since this story ended and I would love to read a follow up. Maybe this one including both Kyle and another hero of Ernest’s “Lord Al”.

Whatever the case is I highly recommend this story to anyone especially if they like D.i.D. stories.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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