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Author's Description:
Rhonda, party girl and girlfriend of the teams star receiver gets jilted at a party and has to take drastic measures to take care of business.
Size: 30 KB (5,791 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Drunk/Drugged, Heterosexual, First, Oral Sex, Size

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


Rhonda is a frustrated cheerleader stranded at a party, high on ecstasy, without her boyfriend who is on his way to detox with alcohol poisoning. She is so frustrated she could fuck the proverbial stump! Which in this case it is William, the hostess' geek brother.

What she doesn't now how well hung he is, and WOW!! She gets the finest fucking of her short life. But what is she to do? Her boyfriend could, and would, eat William for lunch, and she doesn't want that to happen; so, she decides to become his personal trainer, and "make a man out of the geek" So she does.

Enjoy.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Woody   [other reviews by Woody]

Reviewed:


It seems like a standard stroke story. Horny, beautiful cheerleader seduces virginal geek who just happens to be available. Geek, of course, turns out to be a well hung, sensitive lover, and horny cheerleader finds herself wanting more. Sure, predictable, standard story, until you get to the last few paragraphs. (Which I will let you find yourself.)

Not a long enough story for major plot development but well done and very readable. I didn't notice errors in construction and if they don't jump out at me, I don't worry about them. An enjoyable diversion.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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