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Where did this one come from? Now really, Bob, do you really think that your Readers are going to read about a young girl who goes away on a trip with her Pa and sexy brother, and have wonderful incestuous sex in the back of their camper whilst their Dad is driving along a country road? Do you really believe that they would be interested to read about how his sister loses her virginity time and time again on her brother's large erection during their trip without their father knowing? And what about the fact that the innuendo is there that they are unprotected, and a wonderful pregnancy could be taking place?
Well maybe your readers would like to read this story that you wrote so long ago and Lazeez has dusted off the archives because readers will always read one of your excellent tales of family fun?
I'll give you a ten for sex, so there!