Treachery turns a troubled teen to trusting her instincts.... or was that, 'In Stinks'?!
Size: 22 KB (4,037 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, First, School
Review by Stormy Weather [other reviews by Stormy Weather]
Reviewed:
The first morning of Jr. College is a day the heroine in this delightfully humorous tale will never forget.
The night before her first day, she discovers her boyfriend in bed with another woman and sleeps on the couch because she has nowhere else to go. The next morning, her first of Jr. College, she wakes up to the sounds of passion coming from the other room, and rushes out to her first class where she meets a slightly eccentric professor who delivers a lecture to his class that ends with the conclusion: "Follow your nose! The Pheronome Knows!"
I'm not sure if the author meant "Pheromone" or if he intentionally misspelled the word. Whatever, the case, the story is still fun to read.
There were a few grammatical errors or typos that could be cleaned up to make it better. But, overall, this is an interesting well-written story. The author knows how to hold your attention with words, and is skilled at getting his points across and helping the reader to see the story. He also uses his cheeky sense of humor to liven things up; still managing to make the story and the characters believable.
I'm sorry that he hasn't written more stories without story codes that are not to my tastes.
