Greg Hamilton has the dream summer vacation. He gets a seaside mansion in Bellaire Shores, Florida, a nice Mercedes Benz, and a killer speed boat. He can't seem to enjoy it however, because his girlfriend of seven months just informed him that she is marrying a boy back in Kansas. So what is a college boy without a woman supposed to do? Find another one or two well, maybe three ?!!
Size: 443 KB (87,307 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Incest, Brother, Sister, Swinging, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Squirting, Water Sports, Exhibitionism, School
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "Bellaire Belles", we get the story of Greg Hamilton and how he deals with the loss of his girlfriend.
The sex in this story is frequent, hot, and fun. Greg himself does not get involved in any incest, but one of his partner's family is involved with each other. Pretty much everyone fucks everyone, with the exception being Greg and his Aunt.
The plot is simplistic and fairly boring. The main character over-reacts to every single situation with an initial explosion of anger, followed by reconciliation. After a bit, it gets old, and you can easily predict how he will react to any given situation. The sexual relationships border on the "Perfect Sex-Story Storm" phenomena where everyone seems to accept everyone else's kinks, and becomes lovers. That, and almost every character Greg has sex with, he falls in love with.
Technically, this story is not very well done. The number of times there was a space before the final quote on dialogue made for awkward reading. The number of free-floating quotes made knowing when dialogue was starting even harder to determine.
Overall, while this story has some great stroke in it, it falls well short of being a good story. Between its technical problems, and its predictable nature, I had to force myself to not jump forward to the next meaningful scene. The cherry on top of this sundae was the car accident-amnesia-I want to only love Ashley, but we will have an open relationship ending felt like the author was forcing himself out of a story he had run into a wall with. It may have taken several chapters, but it was just silly.
Read this one for it's strong stroke value, and don't try think about the plot or its weak characters.
