What they did on their anniversary night.
Size: 22 KB (4,425 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, True Story, Exhibitionism
Review by Celeste [other reviews by Celeste]
Reviewed:
The husband and wife go to an amusement park near Copenhagen and make out in outlandish ways while on the rides and in the funhouses. Then they copulate in the forest, in plain sight of the strongman with the mallet that hits the lever that makes the ball go up and ring the bell -- plus miscellaneous other onlookers.
A good time is had by all, and then they have an uneventful trip home.
As the author herself acknowledges, this story lacks some of the dialog and plot development that often occur in a creative short story. That's because she presents this story as a true summary of what she and her husband did on the night of their wedding anniversary. If you have read other stories by this author, you may enjoy this straightforward approach, because it gives the impression of letting us see inside the real life of a person whom we know from the other stories she has written for us.
