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Author's Description:
Toy is a submissive owned by an average yet married man. Who knew she'd have the power to corrupt a fine, upstanding member of the community.
Size: 91 KB (18,581 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, MaleDom, FemaleDom

Review by Eddie Davidson   [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]

Reviewed:


Full Disclosure: I've made no secret that some of my favorite active authors are MaryS, Vulgus, and Mike McGifford.

In that sense, my reviews toward their stories tend to be rather biased in favor of them.

If you like my stories, you will LOVE their stories. They are definitely an inspiration of mine.

Toy is a a short story that begins with a friend who is also married introducing his live-in slave/lover to his friend. It's the kind of impossible situation that is fun to explore.

There are some nice twists and turns, and the pacing is really nice. Grammatically and stylistically, Mike always delivers an almost flawless experience.

He's a show, don't tell author.

There isn't a lot of graphic sex but I highly recommend it.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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