A passionate relationship develops between a girl who moved away from her her and a girl that offered her comfort
Size: 197 KB (37,246 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian
Review by Celeste [other reviews by Celeste]
Reviewed:
I try to wait until all the parts of serialized stories have been posted before I post my review. I have seen seven parts of this story, and the seventh says it will be continued; but I am going to go ahead and post my review now, since I haven't seen an eighth part yet and don't think there is one.
This is an exceptionally well written, sensitive story about the intimate relationship between two young girls. It's almost like a good Judy Blume story - except, of course, that teenagers read Judy Blume, whereas they would never think of reading stories on a.s.s., which are prohibited to them. In fact, I think it is possible that Linda B may actually be Judy Blume, prematurely reincarnated and living in that literary commune in a Waldenesque setting near Sulfur Springs. {Incidentally, if you think Judy Blume writes only for kids, you should read her "Smart Women," which is probably available in your local public library.}
This author is intimately attuned to the emotions likely to be felt and expressed by teenagers trying to establish their sexual identities. I myself am a happy heterosexual, but I recall feeling many of these same emotions (if not the same activities) that Jenny and Sarah express in this story. (I have no intention of revisiting my discussion of whether practically all adolescent women experience these emotions. They do; but I have promised not to make an issue of that theory.) This is a really good story.
The author has an interesting disclaimer, which reads in part: "If you are a teenager, we as adults don't think that you should read this, even though you are sexually mature and probably have much more sexual desire than we do. We are merely jealous of your sexual virility. Please leave us alone to *fantasize* about being your age once again. I'm sorry but you'll have to wait until you're at least 18 before you can have your own fantasies. Preferably you should wait until you're at least 30 or older, that way you can really have something to fantasize about: your very own teenaged years!" <Hear, hear!> <Well said!> <Touche!> <Applause>
