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Author's Description:

Size: 32 KB (6,100 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction

Review by Celeste   [other reviews by Celeste]

Reviewed:


This is a story about a young woman who travels by water and by hiking and mountain climbing to a beautiful place in the remote wilderness and masturbates there before bedding down for the night in a cave. (Sue adds a few details that make it more interesting than my preceding sentence.) In the middle of the night she is visited by a Kachina - an ancestral Anasazi spirit-god that had come back to life.

Hey! What can I say? You're going to read the descriptions of the previous four stories, and then tell me that this one is unrealistic just because a beautiful blonde woman has passionate sex with a man old enough to be her ancestor who comes alive from a painting on a cave wall? Believe what you will. I say, if Peter Pan can have Tinkerbell and if the Greeks can have Zeus and Aphrodite, then Sue can have her Kachina!

Sue does an excellent job of integrating the sexual activity with the surroundings and even with a sensitivity to the ancient Native American heritage. This was a very good story.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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