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Author's Description:
Who would ever think that it's possible to find the right one at a seasonal canning facility?
Size: 99 KB (18,566 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Workplace, Interracial, White Male, Hispanic Female, Oral Sex

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed:


In "Sandra Jiminez", we have the story of a man who works for a produce company, who shows up at the seasonal can corning time. One of the Spanish speaking workers is a beautiful young woman named Sandra Jiminez. She doesn't speak a word of English, but she's smart and quick. Soon she's working with the man, and flirting begins. What happens between two people who are attracted to each other, but have a near complete language barrier? Read along and find out.

The sex in the story is passionate and intense, with definite stroke value. Their first encounter is especially fun.

The plot itself is quite an intersting one. The language barrier makes for a more primitive feel to the interactions at times. The humor expressed in the story is often worthy of an out loud chuckle or two. Overall, a nicely crafted tale with a surprise ending.

Technically, the story was fairly strong. I think it was my browser (I looked both with IE7 and FireFox), but many of the ` e's showed up as either a blank box, or a ? in a diamond. It also may be the formatting or old HTML. I don't knock the story much for that, but it is a little distracting.

Overall, this is a very good story by Losgud, and one of his few non-incest featuring ones. Sandra is a likeable young woman that peaks our story-teller's interest, and holds it tightly. Their interactions with the language barrier are fun, and leads to a great ending.

I recommend this story if you like humor in your stroke. I find it makes for a better overall experience, unless you are looking for a quickie.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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