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Author's Description:
Father and son go to new strip-club. Son finds out that his mother’s bible study group are strippers. I thought about making this a multi-chapter story, but I have other projects I’m working on. This story popped into my head as I was sitting in the dark in my closet.
Size: 21 KB (4,105 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Incest, Mother, Son, Facial, Oral Sex

Review by Eddie Davidson   [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]

Reviewed:


MaryS creates alternate worlds where sex/incest is often fairly normalized in ways that are internally consistent with the logic of the world.

Just as a fantasy author creates a world of elves and talking trees to tell tales of swords of sorcery.

MaryS typically goes between misogynistic worlds where women can submit to sexual contracts and be objectified as the norm, and brutal femdom worlds. I often envision the "Housewives at Play" art of Rebecca - when I read these stories.

In this short one chapter story, a father is taking his son to a strip club as a rite of passage. How that relates to a "Bible Study" is going to have to wait until you read it - but it does.

It's hard to write short stories and breathe life into the characters, but I could definitely visualize it all, and my only regret was there was not more planned as I could certainly see it.

If you like MaryS stories, you'll love this. If you like humiliation/incest stories you'll probably find this awesome.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: N/A
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