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Author's Description:
My friends and I have been abducted by alien invaders and are about to be collared and used as new toys for their slave ship crew.
Size: 18 KB (3,737 words)
Genre: Mind Control
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Coercion, Mind Control, Slavery, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Science Fiction, Aliens, Group Sex, First

Review by Mythic Shadow   [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]

Reviewed:


Collared as a Harath Sex Toy is a fast paced smut story about women being abducted and to serve as slave girls to an alien species.

It's an entertaining read, although maybe a bit too fast paced. I would have liked to see more descriptions about the alien race, what the collar did, and possibly more about hints for what would happen next. This is a good thing though, the story could easily expand into a universe with other similar stories and more plot.

As is, there weren't a lot of plot twists, but with a short story you don't need much of that either. On the technical aspects I found very little mistakes, and overall I enjoyed reading the story. I just wish there was more of it!

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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