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Author's Description:
Serious but sometimes good consequences can come from carelessness.
Size: 44 KB (8,304 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Science Fiction, Alternate History, Interracial

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

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In this review of ‘Traffic Violation,’ a story by SW MO Hermit, we started reading expecting something to do with cars (I.E., automobiles), vehicles, and law enforcement. But we stumbled into a modern-day cowboy getting a chance to build America better, reject war, and save our environment.

John Stevens, a recent medical school graduate to be a Physician’s Assistant, was in hiding outside of Colorado Springs, Colorado, his marriage canceled; he had run to the high country to escape from his fiancee, a cheating skank of the lowest category. Something happens on the trail; he’s knocked from his prized stallion. He continues after getting on his feet, catching his animals, and fighting his headache. But changes had happened. He came upon some Indian camp with two injured teenage girls, and his training took over. John takes a terrible situation and rewrites the history of the United States.

SW MO Hermit has created an exciting story of what could happen in an alternate universe. Throw a man into unique situations; anything can happen in written tales.

This story does exactly that. Traffic Violation is a story well worth spending some time reading.

The author SW MO Hermit has created an entertaining story slipping into the past/future to dream of life and romance.

Oh, there is a traffic violation, just not the one expected!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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