Author's Description:
There was this girl - A simple trip downstairs in the elevator changed both their lives. There was a bit more to it than that, but not much.
Size: 23 KB (4,680 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Romantic, Military
There was this girl - A simple trip downstairs in the elevator changed both their lives. There was a bit more to it than that, but not much.
Size: 23 KB (4,680 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Romantic, Military
Review by burka_oz [other reviews by burka_oz]
Reviewed:
OK, this is a short tale, not a flash but just a nice sweet and short tale. I think most of you will like it. I certainly enjoyed/ Watch out for the closure.
Well done, that snuck up on me a got an "aww" out of me.
Nice work Charlie.
Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
