Reviewed:
I think that I have read all of Ka Hmnd's stories posted here. They all, to me, have a reasonable plot line and reasonably told. This one, however, I believe is his best offering so far.
This is a good plot line, adventure, mystery, danger, love and romance. No gratuitous sex.
He finishes the story at a good point, no cliff hanger, and where it would be silly to continue on and become a meaningless soap opera style offering.
Well done sir.