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Author's Description:
A young man is propelled into a magical world by an unexplained explosion. He'll have to survive in this new world. Good thing he's skilled.
Size: 773 KB (152,891 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, High Fantasy

Review by therev   [other reviews by therev]

Reviewed:


I think that I have read all of Ka Hmnd's stories posted here. They all, to me, have a reasonable plot line and reasonably told. This one, however, I believe is his best offering so far.

This is a good plot line, adventure, mystery, danger, love and romance. No gratuitous sex.

He finishes the story at a good point, no cliff hanger, and where it would be silly to continue on and become a meaningless soap opera style offering.

Well done sir.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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