The Unicorn by qhml1
An average guy. A retired model worth millions. Can it work?
Size: 173 KB (34,987 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
This is the first story in a long time that I gave a ten to. I was surprised how emotional I felt reading parts of the story. It's possible your mileage may vary, but if you don't think this story is a good read you must have a very different background than I.
The short description of the story is boy meets girl, boy gets girl, and they live happily ever after. The details are what makes this story entertaining.
There is nothing complicated about the plot, it is better than average in my opinion, but a seven handles the rating. Technical is fine. I will give it a nine, as I didn't spend a lot of time reviewing it line by line. There aren't a lot of stories, in my opinion, for what it is worth, that are so amazing that the Technical score should be a ten. As I opened this review, the Appeal to this reviewer is a ten. Most amazing story. I am very glad I sat down at my computer and chose to read it.
