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Author's Description:
His girlfriend's lusty past turns him on. He finds out just how hot a legendary redhead can be.
Size: 26 KB (5,162 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Teenagers, Romantic, Sharing, Incest, First, Nudism

Review by Lugh   [other reviews by Lugh]

Reviewed:


I only regret that I could not rate this story an 11. Tony and I share some kinks that may not be for everyone, but that we approach differently than most commercial pornographers and some amateur writers.

Alesteir Crowley, the self-described "wickedest man in the world" and occultist, used the term "elixir" to describe the mixture of semen and vaginal secretions. He believed it charged with great magickal power, and similar reports came from some anthropologists studying sex magick. That's the farthest thing in the world than some writing disparaging men enjoying it as weak cuckolds, or women using their secretions, or mixtures from previous play, to humiliate.

Tony and I see such play as the mark of a powerful woman sharing her sexuality with many. Her lovers, male or female, sharing the experience, might just delight into "wallowing in the wicked [forbidden]".

This story takes some original twists on it -- you should read it to find out what he means by "indirect incest".

It's extremely friendly to a great age range, is supportive to people with disabilities, and, for me, is a tour de force of joy.

Techically, he writes well. I prefer strong visual descriptions and they are present. It does well at looking into the characters' far pasts and bringing them to a happy present and future.

I have a novelette-length story close to being ready for posting, which shares many of these themes and images.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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