Taking a shortcut to a wedding David Cashmore's SUV breaks down in an abandoned roadhouse. Two bikers happen on the scene and offer their help and fix the vehicle. David offers cash but the bikers want a fair trade for their endeavors - they want to 'borrow' David's wife in exchange for their time and effort. David is forced to watch while the bikers take turns using his wife.
Size: 48 KB (9,009 words)
Genre: Suspense
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, NonConsensual, Rape, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Fiction, Cuckold, Wimp Husband, Humiliation, Light Bond, Rough, Sadistic, Gang Bang, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Tit-Fucking, BBW, Leg Fetish, Public Sex
Review by Eddie Davidson [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]
Reviewed:
I do not normally review short stories. This one is only 9,000 words but my one regret is just as the author painted life into David and Michelle Cashmore and I fell in love with finding out more - the story ended.
This is a traditional set-up of hot wife and submissive husband. It's very much a stroke story heavily descriptive of sex and dirty language.
However, in between the lines I wonder - who are these people? Why are they into this? What happened after? Did they talk about what happened? Did they want to do more?
I give it a 6 on plot because for a short story it has a PLOT, which is better than the average short story. It is difficult to be objective though because I wanted more beginning and end not just middle.
I give it a 10 on technical as I saw nothing about it that was grammatically incorrect. I made appeal N/A because I really think unless you like these story codes - you won't like it.
There is a tendency of people who do not like the story codes to down vote a story that they are not into it. They should just not read it. Very unfair to the author. It's feel the downvoting is just punitive.
There is another story with the same characters called Road Rage about another of their adventures that Michele recently posted. That's how I discovered this gem.
I encourage you if you are a fan of FLR/Femdom type stories to give this one a read. I think the appeal is somewhat subjective but if you like the story codes then you will like this.
