Young woman discovers that sex is NOT a new discovery as Grandma relates her sex history and gives guidance as the grandaughter's own develops.
Size: 18 KB (3,481 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Sharing, Slut Wife, Incest, First
Review by Lugh [other reviews by Lugh]
Reviewed:
Let me quote some lines from the story, which make it a 10 for me all by themselves.
He reveled in her sexiness and their own lovemaking was enhanced. He’d only been with prostitutes before her but had thought, as he was pushing himself inside them, how many men had been where he was, and even their faking their enjoyment with him was terribly erotic. To watch her pleasured by another man for real was very stimulating and they would have sex long after the other man had left their bed.”
This is amazing, in that it hits my favorite kinks, without any undesirable sense of dominance, humiliation, or what I find an ugly world, cuckold. When I was growing up, some assorted female authority figures in my family imposed an unhealthy context of guilt, of expecting a notarized contract before lightly touching a lovely lady. An aunt, who was my foster mother for a time, once told me "rape is when you do anything that a woman doesn't want."
In my adolescence and early twenties, I had incredible difficulty in recognizing what weren't always obvious signals on a date. Looking back, I can see why the women might have felt scorned or rejected, and didn't go for another date.
What Tony describes, with prostitutes, sometimes showgirls, and eventually compatible women, is what I needed for my liberation. Where my aunt and others formed stress triggers and made scars, Grandma is their antithesis, creating a foundation for joy. "Their guidance kept her from making the same mistakes twice and punishing herself too much for them." is a prescription for psychosexual health.
Generally, I like more, not less, visual description in stories. Depending on how the author envisions Grandma, that might or might not work here. On the other hand, I'm 70. There are women in my high school class that can be confused with their grandmothers. Sophia Loren is in her 80s, but also with fantastic genetics. When I go to physical therapy, there's often another patient, who must be in her 80s from some comments, who, even in the discomfort of exercises, is poetry in motion. I've also known some 80-year-olds who don't meet visual ideals, but have personalities that are such that one barely notices. I suspect Grandma, no matter what she looks like, could easily get me into her bed for a great time. For the record, I'm not one of the older looking of my class, but I am working on regaining physical fitness.
It is in this area of personal appeal that I took off a technical point, in that I think it could, even in personality, be polished.
Bravo.
