Dale has to get his life back in order after a nasty accident at work has left him a paraplegic. His one bright light is his live-in career.
Size: 108 KB (21,397 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction, White Couple, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Slow
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
There is some sex but mostly it is a very romantic story. I like a lot of this authors stories but this one just insisted I tell you about it. It is well worth reading and if you don't like it, you must dislike Australia and Australians and happy endings.
The girl helps the guy get much better and at the end they get married. There is plenty of sex and a little engineering. Read it, I am sure you will like it.
The plot is not convoluted it goes straight as an arrow to the happy ending. Time flies like an arrow, fruit flies like a banana. The hero's banana or some similar appendage is featured in the story. I am going to give all the scores an eight, very good. You do have to understand at least most Australian to work with the Technical. I didn't see any errors, but I was busy appreciating the story, no time to proofread. Appeal probably should have been higher than an eight, but it is simpler to just give every score the same number so I don't have to justify variations. You probably should read the other stories by this author, I have and have been satisfied. Some of them have other than hetrosexual elements but they are mostly on other planets. This one is set on Earth and is definitely hetrosexual. Try it, I bet you will like it, too.
Review by Xalir [other reviews by Xalir]
Reviewed:
Twitch is the story of the main character's road to recovery after waking up in the hospital terribly injured. It's a very pleasant store with its own charm and wit. It takes place in Australia but could as easily have been dropped into any place in the world without more than a change in some of the slang. Very easy to read and very easy to enjoy.
From a technical standpoint, there were a few missing words in the early going and a couple of pronouns that needed changing ("he" needs to be changed to "his" in a couple of sentences), but overall, the story flows, the dialogue feels natural and the pacing is good.
I really enjoyed the story and strongly recommend it to any and all.
