Recently, I watched a video clip of a beautiful woman being paraded naked through city streets and being gang-fucked in a bar. It reminded me of Sylvia Krystel's son being interviewed as a teenager and being asked what he thought about his mom appearing in the Emmanuelle movies. What would you do if you ran across a video like this of your mom?
Size: 111 KB (22,889 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Fa/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Incest, Mother, Son, Daughter, Voyeurism, Double Penetration
Review by Eddie Davidson [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
This is a "Dialogue only" story which is a very difficult thing to pull off.
The author has to essentially express emotion, and even tell you which character is speaking with strictly dialogue. This story does that well and the premise lends itself to the format.
The story begins with a son finding his mom's old porn video. She is very laid back and open minded and they have a dialogue about what he saw. There are two people speaking and it is very easy to follow the flow and pacing between them as they have this interesting conversation.
The story cuts to her telling her husband about the encounter and you can literally see the bedroom without the author describing any of it. That's what I mean by difficult. All of the tools that an author has to tell you the sights, sounds, smells, emotions are gone except for dialogue and yet Wyden Long pulls it off.
The family goes on a fantastic adventure in this story, and my only regret was that it wasn't longer. There is no BDSM/domestic discipline or humiliation aspects in the story, which could have been a real plus. I'd love to see another version told with the inclusion of that - example being the mom made mention of wearing a slave collar in the video but that consensual BDSM relationship was not discussed.
I did not see any grammatical issues, it read like a dream. I'll give it an 11 on technical simply because of how hard it is to write a story with dialogue only. I am relegated to 10 on the drop down for the score.
A visit to Grandma's house would probably be a fantastic sequel. I haven't seen any new stories from Wyden Long in a while, but I intend to read other stories in the catalog. This was the only one I have found so far that was dialogue only. Their library seems to have a wide variety of story settings/scenarios.
Update: Someone let me know that sadly Wyden Long passed away.
