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Epic Length Gaining Power

ralord82276 ๐Ÿšซ
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I am looking for long (hopefully very long) completed stories where the MC gains power slowly (mental abilities, physical abilities, magical abilities, financial empire, etc) and has to learn how to get the most out of their abilities to accomplish their goals as well as dealing with the ethics of their abilities.

A good example of the type of story I am looking for is Deja Vu Ascendancy by AscendingAuthor.

For stories with a person suddenly gaining power, I definitely prefer stories where they aren't overpowered, their power shows growth over time/use, and the power they gain causes them to have to examine the ethics of using it allowing for character growth. Ideally, while the power can help in some cases, it should also be the cause of problems for the MC as well.

Any suggestions?

akarge ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Arlene and Jeff by roustwriter, parts one and 2. Financial, telekinesis, spaceships,

Florida Friends series by Dualwriter. Financial and a bit of telepathy

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ralord82276 ๐Ÿšซ

@akarge

Thanks. I have Arlene and Jeff on my reading list already. I will look into Florida Friends.

rkimmelerre ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Kinetic by Hammingbyrd7 is about a young man gaining a frankly terrifying amount of power.

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@rkimmelerre

Kinetic by Hammingbyrd7 is about a young man gaining a frankly terrifying amount of power.

But not the epic length that the OP asked for.

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rkimmelerre ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Eh, it's longer than Gilgamesh. And most online stories are stupid long these days. At least in my opinion, which I'm forced to admit is far from universal.

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ
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@rkimmelerre

Eh, it's longer than Gilgamesh. And most online stories are stupid long these days. At least in my opinion, which I'm forced to admit is far from universal.

Most dead tree fiction is longer than you seem to think.

Average novel lengths by genre:

https://www.publishingtalk.org/writing/how-many-words-in-a-novel-average-word-count-for-books-by-genre/

Dรฉbut fiction: 80,000 words โ€“ for the reasons outlined above. Though there are outliers.

Literary Fiction: 50,000โ€“150,000 words. Because 'literary fiction' is used to describe any novel that doesn't easily fit onto a specific genre, it's hard to give a 'typical' word length โ€“ because it can be very wide ranging! It could be as short as The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald (177pp / 48,000 words) or as long as The Secret History by Donna Tartt (503pp / 140,000 words).

Romantic Fiction: 70,000โ€“90,000 words. Tends to be shorter than literary fiction, or other genre fiction. Examples include The Corner Shop in Cockleberry Bay by Nicola May (328pp / 83,000 words).

Historical Fiction: 90,000โ€“120,000+. Tends to be longer than average. Examples include: The River Between Us by Liz Fenwick (512pp / 130,000 words, The Sewing Machine by Natalie Fergie (368pp / 112,000 words). Outliers include Wolf Hall by Hilary Mantel (604pp / 166,000 words).

Science Fiction: 70,000โ€“120,000. Examples include Isaac Asimov's Foundation (240pp / 70,000 words), and Station Eleven by Emily St John Mandel (352pp / 98,000 words).

Fantasy: 100,000-150,000 words. Examples include The Hunger Games (384pp / 100,000). Outliers include Game of Thrones: A Song of Ice and Fire (912pp / 250,000 words).

Thrillers: 80,000โ€“100,000+ words. Examples include The Girl on the Train (416pp / 114,000 words)

Crime Fiction: 80,000โ€“150,000 words. Examples include His Bloody Project by Graeme Macrae Burnet (288pp / 80,000 words) and anything by Val McDermid, such as The Distant Echo (576pp / 150,000 words)

Horror: 80,000โ€“100,000 words. For example Misery by Stephen King (384pp / 105,000 words). His It is an outlier at 1,088 pp / 300,000 words). Shorter horror novels include We Have Always Lived in the Castle by Shirley Jackson (176pp / 50,000 words).

Young Adult: 50,000โ€“80,000 words. YA novels tend to be shorter than adult fiction. For example A Monster Calls by Patrick Ness is 240pp / 65,000 words. However, obvious exceptions include anything in the fantasy genre aimed at young people โ€“ such as the His Dark Materials trilogy by Philip Pullman (book 3, The Amber Spyglass, is 560pp / 150,000 words).

At 82,826 words Kinetic by Hammingbyrd7 is well within typical novel lengths and would be at the short end for several genres. And the only category in which it would be above typical length is Young Adult.

Epic length in dead tree would be in the range of 200+ kw.

The story mentioned by the OP as an exemplar is 3,474,271 Words

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

https://www.publishingtalk.org/writing/how-many-words-in-a-novel-average-word-count-for-books-by-genre/

To go from word count to page count you multiply by 275 then add 24 for ephemera. But to go from page count to word count you don't subtract 24 before dividing by 275.

Neither the blogger nor the other sources he references have made a rigorous study; it's all very subjective guesswork.

AJ

Dicrostonyx ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Also worth noting that the above numbers are for established authors. First time authors are usually expected to be about 30% shorter than the average for their genre. Newer but non-debut authors will also usually be encouraged to write shorter books until they build up a following.

With rare exceptions, publishers today aren't buying single books, they're investing in authors.

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

length

From the Clitorides award category of Epic Story:
Any erotic or sex story, more than 100,000 words (500 KB and up of text).

My own definition of an epic-length fiction would be 300,000+ words.

ralord82276 ๐Ÿšซ

@rkimmelerre

Not anywhere near the length of story I was hoping for... but the premise sounds interesting. So adding it to my reading list. Thanks.

MarissaHorne ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

To quote Meat Loaf: -

Don't be sad
'cause two out of three ain't bad.

Three Square Meals by Teler has power development and character growth by considering questions raised about ethics.

Where it fails is that it is overpowered. It starts slowly, but at the point the story has reached, the main group is mighty indeed.

PS; current length on SOL is 3.9 million words.

Replies:   muyoso  Tazzy81  Tazzy81
muyoso ๐Ÿšซ

@MarissaHorne

Yea, but unless you are a 20 year old, that story aint ever getting finished at the pace it is going. It has slowed down to a GLACIAL pace at this point, and the author has been running into issue after issue and pissing off a large chunk of his Patreons, of which I was one.

Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@MarissaHorne

What is unfortunate is ever since Tefler started publishing his work his chapter updates are usually months apart

Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@MarissaHorne

The only problem with reading Tefler's work is the LONG delays between new chapters which a LOT of us got tired of and gave up, plus in a few cases he CLEARLY phoned in chapters with 9-10 pages of basically fuck all but stroke filler

red61544 ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

"Try "Lightning in a Bottle" by Phil Brown. It meets all your criteria but length - it's only 710kb. But he discovers all aspects of his gift gradually; it causes him a lot of problems with the government and others; and poses some ethical questions throughout. If you haven't read it, it's a good, fast-moving read with an open-ended finish which should allow for a Book 2. https://storiesonline.net/s/28470:260124/chapter-1-lightning-in-a-bottle

I just realized that Book Two has already been posted. That adds another 640kb to the length

itsmehonest ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Hidden Heritage series by DeeBee 3 stories about 300k words.
Hidden Heritage I: The Guardians
Synopsis: Stian is a young man in his late teens, recently orphaned but still an excellent hunter and tracker. He's engaged to the prettiest and nicest girl of the village and he's trying to get her parents more agreeable for marriage. The normal village life is suddenly disturbed when the Guardians, who's job is to guard and protect the whole kingdom, stop at the village and ask for assistance. Assistance of the tracker!
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Genre: Fantasy
Codes: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Magic, Romantic, High Fantasy, Mystery

Replies:   thomas_4  Fra Bartolo
thomas_4 ๐Ÿšซ

@itsmehonest

This was a good read, thanks, am on book 3 now.

Fra Bartolo ๐Ÿšซ

@itsmehonest

Thank you for recommending this! I'm about half-way through the first book and I think this is great.

-FB

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

You might consider the "Jake Fielding" trilogy by hermit: combined, it's close to 800k words.

Kidder74 ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Also check out the trilogy by Shadow of Moonlite: Sleepwalker, Dreamweaver, and Dream Master.

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

like an email, an epic is an online piece of data, a picture instead of a message. Although egypt and evil are not necessarily something stored on line.

madnige ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Maybe a bit short at only 1.5MB,but you could try PT Branium's Elements of Power series

Shivers ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Many of John Wales's stories would fit your criteria. The crowning story is Tandra.

Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

I'll put in a pitch for my own Variation On A Theme.

There's a lot of personal growth / coming of age, but (being a Do-Over) the main character does have power (knowledge is power) and uses it to slowly build financial strength (very much a work in progress thus far - far slower than in many do-overs). Ethical concerns are very much in the forefront consistently, and do-overs have some unique ethical challenges to consider as well as the usual ones.

If anyone is 'overpowered,' it's via being unusually mature and smart.

Many longer do-overs fit your criteria, really, at varying levels of overpowered-ness and with varying concerns about ethics.

Franco ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

You might like My Inheritance by E.Z. Riter.

Nizzgrrl ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

Have you read Fresh Start and Fresh Start Epilogue by rlfj? His work is some of the very best on SOL. Fresh Start is a long do-over. But as rlfj reveals Carl's growing wealth and strength as he ages you may forget it's a do-over - just a darn good yarn.

https://storiesonline.net/s/68384/a-fresh-start

https://storiesonline.net/s/76954/a-fresh-start-epilogue

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Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@Nizzgrrl

I agree - those are very good stories. Highly recommended.

Any epic-length do-over should at some point transition into 'the great unknown,' where more is different than the same. Otherwise, there's little point in the person having gotten a second chance at all, at least in my opinion. If they're not changing at least their corner of the world and getting involved with situations and people foreign to their first life experience, something's lacking.

There's natural progression from 'X is going to happen' to 'X is quite likely to happen' to 'as an educated guess, X is more likely than not' to 'I have no idea what comes next.'

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Nizzgrrl ๐Ÿšซ

@Grey Wolf

I agree. I have always considered do-over stories as an opportunity to imagine and to explore. You call it 'the great unknown'; I call it the 'the great what if.'

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@Grey Wolf

This is probably an interception with a fairly wide genre Alternate History.

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Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@samuelmichaels

I tend to think of 'Alternative History' as being past the point of divergence, though. It's usually more 'what if the Nazis won?' and we're years after the war, not at the point where history tipped and things slowly began to diverge.

With Do-Overs (same-universe time-travel do-overs, at least - mine has pre-existing divergences, and e.g. aroslav's 'The Transmogriphication of Jacob Hopkins' doesn't involve time travel), we're actively living through the point where things diverge and should see the way things become less predictable, whether in small ways or big.

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samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@Grey Wolf

With Do-Overs (same-universe time-travel do-overs, at least - mine has pre-existing divergences, and e.g. aroslav's 'The Transmogriphication of Jacob Hopkins' doesn't involve time travel), we're actively living through the point where things diverge and should see the way things become less predictable, whether in small ways or big.

I agree in principle for do-overs, but in both Variations and Transmogrification, the changes began quite a bit before the restore point (e.g. Dave/Darla's birth).

Nizzgrrl ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

Another thought. Have you read Dance of a Lifetime by Don Lockwood or the Dark Day series by Reluctant Sir? They each follow the growth of a boy who faces considerable obstacles until they each are adults who have attained more than they dreamed

The stories stand in sharp contrast to each other, but, hey, they are great reads. Both stories are well written, entertaining and within the realm of the possible. Heck, these stories have earned second and third reads over time.

verve ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Sea-Life's Worlds of Light series fits what you are looking for: https://storiesonline.net/series/242/worlds-of-light

All of Sea-Life's writing is great as far as I'm concerned. :-)

Pastmaster ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Ill plug my own CALEB story here - it's not finished yet but it's close on 1 million words so far, so there's plenty to go at.

KR

PM

Foxtrot2134 ๐Ÿšซ
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@ralord82276

I would recommend A True History by the late Starfleet Carl (completed before he passed and posting finished by his son Firedrake). 5 books, each between 416k and 437k words each with a steady progression of the protag (and growing poly harem's) power and influence from just small works helping the hometown to saving the world (while revolutionizing it through what ends up developing into a globe spanning megacorp with it's own full military).

A lot of ethical discussion at times about the powers in play, how they came about (and grow) as well as the consequences and ethics of the main cast's actions (as well as a lot of other wider cast characters).

Argon ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Past Lives and Thoughts, Sensations and Emotions by Ms. Friday. They are Premier.
T.R.E.S. by Paul Phenomenon, also Premier.
Murder Isle by Mack The Knife, Premier and incomplete.

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

You may look into cultivation or Xianxia web novels. Some of them go for millions of words, and have the overall plot of a powerless boy (girl) become godlike in power by the end of it.

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awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@samuelmichaels

Some of them go for millions of words, and have the overall plot of a powerless boy (girl) become godlike in power by the end of it.

That's the problem with escalation - you end up with nowhere for the protagonist to go. And that leads to third-rate 'next generation' sequels.

AJ

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Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Xianxia authors are really good (well, the better ones) at expanding the settings and the stakes as the protagonist levels up.

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ
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@Quasirandom

Xianxia authors are really good (well, the better ones) at expanding the settings and the stakes as the protagonist levels up.

Also, the plot is ended by the end of the (very long) webnovel. It's a tradeoff of one very long novel vs. multiple sequels with possibly meandering, "pantser" plots.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Quasirandom

Xianxia authors are really good (well, the better ones) at expanding the settings and the stakes as the protagonist levels up.

How do they end their stories once their protagonists become gods?

AJ

Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

It varies a lot. One trajectory is they effectively become ascended elders. Another is, having settled the final conflict, they retire. Some go full Taoist and achieve immortality. A lot depends on the worldbuilding tbh.

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

How do they end their stories once their protagonists become gods?

Some end very abruptly. One author sometimes uses the motivation to be able to resurrect some loved ones as a major plot motivation, and once MC achieves godlike status, the last, short scene of bringing his dead ones to life concludes the novel.

Sometimes a brief statement about plans to leave the universe to discover yet other, more exotic wonders.

Franco ๐Ÿšซ

@ralord82276

Incubus Pupa by Nexte100 on another site might meet some of your criteria, though it is more about gaining sexual power.

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