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Good BTB stories

mtr1go

I am looking for some good BTB (Burn The Bitch) stories where the wronged husband triumphed in the end. I find myself needing a good fantasy.

Ernest Bywater

@mtr1go

Then you might like Debt Collection by Cazna:

https://storiesonline.net/s/52470/debt-collection

blacksash

Also this one, On My Seventeenth Wedding Anniversary by Reltney McFee.

https://storiesonline.net/s/10268/on-my-seventeenth-wedding-anniversary

awnlee jawking

@mtr1go

Have a browse through StangStar06's stories, if you haven't already.

AJ

Vlad_Inhaler

Stultus has a few, although the one I like best is about an ex-girlfriend. "Class Reunion Backseat Becky".

Al Steiner's "The Mommies" also springs to mind although the Ex is more of a peripheral figure there.

Jay Cantrell's "Intersecting Circles".

None of these stories is longer than a couple of chapters but I like all of them.

BlinkReader

One long about many things but with great part "BTB" is from The Scot - "The Hawk and the Chippmunk"

Jim S
Updated:

https://storiesonline.net/s/13643/a-shitty-way-to-end-a-marriage for a humorous take on the topic. I would also mention that there are a ton of these stories here. BTB -- I like the acronym.

Replies:   awnlee jawking  burlarr
awnlee jawking

@Jim S

BTB -- I like the acronym.


I don't. Reminds me too much of certain IT consultants waffling about the opportunities for business-to-business applications.

AJ

Replies:   samuelmichaels
samuelmichaels

@awnlee jawking

I don't. Reminds me too much of certain IT consultants waffling about the opportunities for business-to-business applications.


Nah. That one is always spelled B2B.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking

@samuelmichaels

Our mileages vary ;)

AJ

Jim S

Here is one that I think of as a thinking man's BTB story -- https://storiesonline.net/library/storyInfo.php?id=74533

Replies:   joe_jr2
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@mtr1go

try happyhugo's junkin duncan

Replies:   zellus
zellus

Try reading SW MO Hermit's stories. Many of them is about a cheating wife, and how the husband is triumphant in the end.

https://storiesonline.net/a/SW_MO_Hermit

zellus

@qqqq

https://storiesonline.net/s/62029/junkin-duncan
https://storiesonline.net/a/happyhugo

zellus

https://storiesonline.net/s/68942/dexters-renaissance
https://storiesonline.net/a/Coaster2

You'd think a man would be completely demoralized when he discovered his wife was conspiring against him. But Dexter is no ordinary man. He just doesn't realize it.

Sex Contents: Some Sex | Genre: Romantic
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Cheating, Slow
Size: 334KB | Downloads: 36753 | Votes: 1801 | Score: 8.18
Posted: 9.8.2011, 19.55.52

cantamelon

I REALLY like how he got revenge on his wife in LOOSE CANNONS.

I have reread the story 4 times.

Replies:   Jim S
Jim S

@cantamelon

I REALLY like how he got revenge on his wife in LOOSE CANNONS.


One of Lazlo Zalezac's better ones.

zellus

https://storiesonline.net/s/72970/two-christmasses
https://storiesonline.net/a/StangStar06

burlarr

@Jim S

https://storiesonline.net/s/13643/a-shitty-way-to-end-a-marriage for a humorous take on the topic. I would also mention that there are a ton of these stories here. BTB -- I like the acronym


Loved this story. I read it and work and busted up laughing with people watching me lol

Replies:   joe_jr2
Obliterous

@mtr1go

Penny Whimsy from Pappatoad

https://storiesonline.net/s/58826/penny-whimsy
https://storiesonline.net/a/papatoad

Replies:   jimh67
jimh67

@Obliterous

I just re-read Penny Whimsy for probably the fifth time. I heartily second this suggestion

rustyken

I am surprised that the stories by Shrink42 haven't been mentioned.

Replies:   JohnBobMead
JohnBobMead

@rustyken

Shrink42's stories aren't really BTB stories. The Pygmalian Project, Redemption, and the stories following, they try and fix the relationships.

In a BTB story, the relationship is not going to be fixed. It's over, done with, and the MC is going to give back a bit of what he's put up with for far too long. It's pay back time. Just desserts. Getting what's coming to her. Making damn sure she reaps what she's sown.

Not Shrink42'a style.

Replies:   rustyken
rustyken

@JohnBobMead

You are correct. I obviously wasn't thinking before I responded.

JohnBobMead
Updated:

@rustyken

Well, yes and no.

You had a very good recommendation for stories concerning relationships which have gone sour, and actions taken as a result of that.

It's just that the OP is looking for stories where they aren't going to get better, in fact where the male MC extracts some sort of retribution, and your recommendation was for stories where changes are made in individuals behaviours such that relationships are saved.

In both story types the relationship is doomed if changes aren't made by at least one of the individuals involved.

In a BTB story, it's far too late for that, and the failure of the relationship is clearly the fault of one party, and the actions resulting in the failure of the relationship were unneccessarilly hurtful to the other party; they could have handled things much better, but just couldn't be bothered to do so, they had so little concern for their former partner. So the injured party is after payback. [My phrasing is deliberate; theoretically, a BTB story could involve a male Bastard rather than a female Bitch, although such stories are rare.]

With Shrink42's stories, those changes are commenced before the utter and irrovocable death of the relationship. It must be admitted that some level of coercion is applied to the individual(s) whose behaviour patterns are being modified, they are forced to recognize that their behaviour is destructive, and given a final "shape up or ship out" notification. It's not all sweetness and light. They are held accountable for the results of their actions, it's just that there's still one final opportunity to salvage the relationship, if they feel it's worth salvaging.

If BTB stories aren't your thing, you'll spot that the stories are about relationships which have gone sour without catching the precise sub-genre. And they are sub-genre's of the Relationship Gone Sour genre. I enjoyed Shrink42's stories when I read them, and while BTB isn't my favorite sub-genre, I've read a few that were excellent.

So your recommendation wasn't that far off, really. A near miss; the debris from the shell's impact peppered the actual target.

Peter_H

There are a few by DeYaKen that are (one literally) BtB. Practically every thing by Denham Forest/The Wanderer falls in this bracket. Both are English and not American, which gives their stories a distinctly different flavour (in respect of what to do, and how, and why).

jimh67
Updated:

Just Plain Bob would be the winner by volume in this category. He has 739 stories. He's not totally BTB but if you read the descriptions carefully and stay with scores over 6.0 you should be ok. Or do like I do and search the story for "divorce" to make sure you're getting the jresolution you want.

red61544

"Not Guilty" bu Harddaysknight.
https://storiesonline.net/library/authorFavorites.php?id=5797

Nizzgrrl

Try On My Own by Dual Writer. Humor, redemption, and revenge. Well drawn characters. Part of Dual Writer's Florida Friends series.

https://storiesonline.net/s/61906/on-my-own

JohnBobMead

Very good story, and Royce succeeds in not losing his own soul in the process.

ArthurSB73

WTS Man has an "Odd Job" in his George series that fits also.
https://storiesonline.net/s/66268

joe_jr2

@Jim S

Thanks guys

joe_jr2

@burlarr

👍👍👍👍

Crumbly Writer

@rustyken

You are correct. I obviously wasn't thinking before I responded.

That's OK, you ken's a little rusty, or phrasing it slightly differently, Ken's keen is a bit rusty.

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