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Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ

So I have at the moment a system, not a great one but it is kind of working for now. Where I use regular double quotes for dialogue, but I'm also using single quotes to denote words that need special emphasis.

Right now words in single quotes are 'stressed'. So far their use implies literal and occasionally figurative meaning. I do plan on going back and making some sort of effort to have a variety of notations including italics for terms that are stressed in some way, but right now I'm just blanket putting singles in, in places where I need to go back and put emphasis on something or another.

Do any other writers have some sort of internal notation system that they use to show where things need extra attention? I do also use the comment system in LO fairly extensively so when there's something which requires a little more explanation there's a short note, maybe a paragraph to myself as a reference or reminder.

I really need to pull my finger out and put down some words as it's like four months since I've written much of anything. There's been more drama in my life than I care for and my machine has developed a reasonably serious instability quirk. It might reboot three or four times inside of two hours or maybe run fine for a few weeks with no sign that there's anything wrong. The problem is definitely hardware as it just re-boots, no logs nothing just a hard crash and back at desktop in about 30-40 seconds with no indication why it fell over.

Right now my money is on the power system/supply as there is no real pattern to anything. It can crash when the system is running at 100% or just as easily at 1%. need to pull apart of few 'old' rigs to find a 'control' PSU to eliminate that as a cause. Further testing would be RAM then CPU then Motherboard. The first two are easy. A new main board will require some Google-Fu to track down a suitable replacement and of course funds with which to purchase said board. I can swap in or out other RAM/CPU from spare parts but I don't really have any extra boards just laying around with nothing to do. Funds are as always 'tight' due to more going out than coming in in general but I hope I can find something to help with that quandary soon.

But aside from life kicking me whilst I'm down, I really have few reasons as to why I've not written besides lack of mental 'resources' at the right time of day to put down the words I need to write. In the mean time I've been thinking about the need for some 'system' to annotate the present working draft. I've been in a bit of a dry patch re: an editor or two and perhaps I should be more vigorous pursuing help but with little progress being made at the keyboard I've put this project down for a while in order to leave me a little more time for other demands on my time. I've not even read anything in over a month with everything going on. We'll see if next month changes anything.

But I've derailed my post enough. Besides italic and bold, what hints could be used to push the readers mental buttons to pay attention to the odd word or phrase that needs a little more thought?

Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Freyrs_stories

Do any other writers have some sort of internal notation system that they use to show where things need extra attention?

I do what the Chicago Manual of Style says to do: use italics.

Replies:   Argon
Argon ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

I concur. Italics get the attention, but are less hamfisted than bold or underline. Capitals signify screaming or headlines in tabloids.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Freyrs_stories

The problem is definitely hardware as it just re-boots, no logs nothing just a hard crash and back at desktop in about 30-40 seconds with no indication why it fell over.

It could be a leaky capacitor.

AJ

Replies:   Freyrs_stories
Freyrs_stories ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

will examine

REP ๐Ÿšซ
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@Freyrs_stories

I generally use italics or bold. If I want to really make a word stand out, all caps with either italics or bold, or both, will do that.

Replies:   Paladin_HGWT
Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ

@REP

I generally use italics or bold. If I want to really make a word stand out, all caps with either italics or bold, or both, will do that.

I too do what REP does; as do some other writers I know.

It may not be the Chicago manual of Style. However, it works in multiple formats, is noticeable by people with bad vision, and works when reading small print on a phone.

rustyken ๐Ÿšซ

@Freyrs_stories

I prefer bold or underline for indicating emphasis

Replies:   richardshagrin
richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@rustyken

emphasis

M for mother, Fa for father, sis for sister. It is a family word.

Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@Freyrs_stories

I'm not 100% understanding the question, exactly.

For reader-facing finished work, I use italics for emphasis in speech. I occasionally also use single-quotes in places where people would commonly use 'finger quotes' - where the word itself is being called into question, rather than being emphasized.

But you mentioned an 'internal notification system' for 'go[ing] back and put[ting] emphasis on something or another'. I commonly edit my text in ProWritingAid's standalone editor, which doesn't support italics. When I get to a word that needs attention, I add two underscores (__) in front of it. It's very easy to search for those later to fix the attention called to the word.

So, as an internal system, that :) Maybe that helps? I don't know.

My editors occasionally wondered why the __'s are there, but they now know what I'm doing.

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