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I've just submitted a new story, Charley and Claire, for posting.

There are 21 shortish chapters, all complete and fully edited. If I got it right with the submission wizard you'll see the forward and chapter 1 shortly, then a new chapter every three days until it's done.

The story was largely inspired by Oyster50's Smart Girl stories and deals with much of the same subject matter, though there are a few differences. For one, the sex between characters doesn't start till half way through the story and there's very little of it that's graphic. It also comes from the software side of things, CompSci rather than EE.

While Rape is in the codes, it's not about rape and the one that takes place is not described in any detail, being confined to one paragraph.

Please see the forward for more information.

All of the story chapters for both Protective Coloration and Expanding Dizyntk have been updated. The introduction for the latter was not.

Please, if you see a mistake, let me know! I know some authors take the stance that if you're not paying for it then you get what you get, but I want it to be right. If I agree with you and can make the change without rewriting parts of the story then I'll be happy to do so.

I was just rereading some stories and this is a favorite - quite possibly the best short story I've read on Storiesonline, which is saying something. No sex at all. In such a short story I still managed to fall in love with the characters.

Hockey Sticks and Roses

TeNderLoin did an edit for Building a Better Past and I just posted it. Many, many thanks to him for taking a look at it.

If you find anything else please let me know! I have the files handy so it's a great time to do further cleanup.

I just have to quit trying to upload.docx files and start tagging text files for formatting. I've just reuploaded all of the chapters for this story after having done that.