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One of my sharp-eyed readers spotted a couple of flubs that had gotten through my editing. They were introduced after my editors last saw the story, so the fault is completely mine. They've been fixed now.
The same reader gave me a critique of the story so far - a very welcome critique. There might be some things I can improve with edits to the current story, but it will also help me in stories going forward.
Please, everyone, if you find something that bothers you about my stories, let me know. It might be intentional or it might be something that I wasn't communicating clearly enough. It's also possible it was a mistake. I'll never know, though, if you don't point it out to me. Oh, and you'll have more chance of your comment being considered if you do it respectfully.
Today's chapter starts a new, and important, story arc. In the next few chapters Claire is exposed to new ideas, and begins to better understand the direction she wants to take as she continues to blossom.
A comment from a reader got me thinking about the pronunciation of some of the place names I mention in this story. I'll admit to a bit of a blind spot there due to long association.
I've just added a brief guide to the forward to help people's inner narrator get the sounds right. If I missed something that you wonder about, please let me know and I'll add it.
I've posted updated versions of chapters 1-10. No changes to the story itself, but a raft of proofreading fixes.
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