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Feedback please!

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I'm always up for some constructive criticism. Note that I said 'constructive.' "Your story sucks" doesn't help me write better stories, while a comment like "I think you developed the plot too quickly," or "You could have given more detail in this particular part" can help me. Who knows? I might even edit the story with your suggestions in mind.

Also, thanks to a couple of readers who have pointed out some glaring typos in a couple of my stories. I'm my own editor, and I think I do a pretty decent job, but I'm certain to miss something now and then.

A few older stories first

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I've been touching up and fixing some things in older stories that were posted elsewhere, so enjoy those for now. I have some new stories in the works that should be ready before long.

Comments are welcome. Be sure to vote.

A little about me

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I've been writing erotic stories for about fifteen years now. Some of you may recognize some of my stories from another site (which will remain nameless for now) but I promise that the ones I re-post here will have been cleaned up and edited a little more closely. The first of those reposts is "Band Parents" which is a tale that starts simply as some cheating but soon will heat up and get a little kinky.

There's also some new stuff on the way, so stand by.

 

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