OldBillyBob: Blog

Abby, daughter of the band boosters president in the story Band Parents happened to see her mother getting fucked by Billy. She tries to blackmail him into fucking her. She gets fucked alright, but the tables definitely get turned.

One possible 'squick' for some of you: Billy is not the same nice guy he usually is in the rest of the stories. I hope you agree that the little snot deserves the harsh treatment she gets.

Chapter six of Band Parents has a bunch of random characters in the text. I'm fixing it. A revised chapter should be up soon. Thank you MicroSchlock Word for the wonderful job you do of creating a text file from one of your documents.

Some readers with sharp eyes have pointed out a few more typos that I dealt with. You know how it is; we see what we want to see rather than what's actually on the page.

Also, some points for honesty from an anonymous reader who got squicked by the four-way snowball in Band Parents and stopped reading at that point. I'm not going to change the story, though. I intended the story to be a sort of 'cuckolding without fem dom' story, where everyone is uninhibited enough to just dive in and go for it, and I see the story going a few places that will squick a few more folks. After all, we have two couples who are into some serious cum play here, but so far we haven't had any same-sex contact. You see where I'm going?

Anyway, please feel free to let me know if you spot any mistakes in the stories, or just want to let me know what you've enjoyed (or what you think I could improve on.) I'll try to respond if you leave me an email address.

I'm always up for some constructive criticism. Note that I said 'constructive.' "Your story sucks" doesn't help me write better stories, while a comment like "I think you developed the plot too quickly," or "You could have given more detail in this particular part" can help me. Who knows? I might even edit the story with your suggestions in mind.

Also, thanks to a couple of readers who have pointed out some glaring typos in a couple of my stories. I'm my own editor, and I think I do a pretty decent job, but I'm certain to miss something now and then.

I've been touching up and fixing some things in older stories that were posted elsewhere, so enjoy those for now. I have some new stories in the works that should be ready before long.

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