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I have a couple more ideas for the Band Parents series, but I was wondering if some other authors had stories they wanted to tie into this 'world' as a universe. Pretty much anything goes in Band Parents world that a bunch of parents could get up to - hookups, threesomes, older/younger, polyamory, gay, lesbian, whatever.
Please let me know your thoughts about opening Band Parents up as a universe for other authors to post stories in.
A few readers have commented that Band Parent Billy got totally out of character by dumping so much rage on Abby in Chapter 2 of Abby the Flute Girl and part of me agrees. He was pretty harsh. The angle I approached the story from was 'if she's using sex as a weapon for blackmail, Billy should shoot right back.'
Looking at it in light of some of the feedback I got, I think I should do an alternate version where Billy uses tactics more like a martial arts throw. You let your opponent's momentum do the work and then your move throws them to the mat. I think I can do that.
Abby was based on a real character from when I was a Band Parent myself. She was my son's section leader for marching band when he was a freshman, and she was a beautiful little arrogant snot that terrorized the whole section and most of the parents that chaperoned the band, including me. Maybe that's why it felt so good to write that chapter. There were several Friday nights during football season when I wanted to take her out behind the press box and give her a whipping. I think her section might have even held her down while I did it.
Anyway, I'm going to leave this version up as a testament to every middle aged man who's ever had to endure a teenager like her. Look for a kinder, gentler Billy in the remake. Abby will still be a snot, but she'll come around.
Abby, daughter of the band boosters president in the story Band Parents happened to see her mother getting fucked by Billy. She tries to blackmail him into fucking her. She gets fucked alright, but the tables definitely get turned.
One possible 'squick' for some of you: Billy is not the same nice guy he usually is in the rest of the stories. I hope you agree that the little snot deserves the harsh treatment she gets.
Chapter six of Band Parents has a bunch of random characters in the text. I'm fixing it. A revised chapter should be up soon. Thank you MicroSchlock Word for the wonderful job you do of creating a text file from one of your documents.
Some readers with sharp eyes have pointed out a few more typos that I dealt with. You know how it is; we see what we want to see rather than what's actually on the page.
Also, some points for honesty from an anonymous reader who got squicked by the four-way snowball in Band Parents and stopped reading at that point. I'm not going to change the story, though. I intended the story to be a sort of 'cuckolding without fem dom' story, where everyone is uninhibited enough to just dive in and go for it, and I see the story going a few places that will squick a few more folks. After all, we have two couples who are into some serious cum play here, but so far we haven't had any same-sex contact. You see where I'm going?
Anyway, please feel free to let me know if you spot any mistakes in the stories, or just want to let me know what you've enjoyed (or what you think I could improve on.) I'll try to respond if you leave me an email address.
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