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I enjoyed writing this story, reminiscing about something that happened to me many years ago. I embellished it of course but a fair bit of it is true. I wasn't expecting it to be very well received since m/m stories don't fare well on this site, but I hope some of you will like it. Of course it could be my writing ability or lack thereof! Please let me know what you think.
It took me a while but I finally got around to finishing and posting chapter 23. I think that I have at least a few more chapters to write until it's finished. Some readers have said that they are a bit confused with my changing POV's so I have responded to that and now indicate the different story teller each time there is a change. Please let me know if you like the idea. Also I would appreciate any other comments as I always love hearing from readers. Thanks!
After thinking about it for a long time, I have decided to continue the story. It was pointed out to me that it was a rather abrupt ending. First off, I have revised the chapter 22 ending. Now I plan to write a couple more chapters, tying up some loose ends with plot and characters. Please let me know what you think. I love to get feedback.
I finally posted what turns out to be the last chapter of the story. It seems to me to be a good way to end it. I hope you like it. Comments are always appreciated!
I'm finally getting around to continuing the story. It should be out soon. Sorry about the delay.
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