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IMHO, this is my best chapter so far. I have invented a game for couples to play that I think you might enjoy reading about or perhaps even participating in some day. Comments are welcome.
I just had chapter three of my 'Eric the amazing massage therapist' published. The first two chapters were originally posted on another site. I wrote chapter three, the conclusion in the past few days. I re-wrote some parts of the first two, changing it to what I intended to say but wasn't allowed to on the other website. Please let me know what you think. I am open to any suggestions or comments both good and bad. Thanks!
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