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Thinking about writing another chapter with a few ideas in mind where to take it. Should I take the plunge or let it be?
I wrote a story 'Wife away...time to play' a couple of years ago for another site. It got favourable reviews but I think people were being kind as it was my first attempt at writing an erotic story. I have rewritten it somewhat. Also corrected the grammar and punctuation. The first chapter introduces the characters and the second, fleshes it out, so to speak! I hope you like it. Comments are appreciated
Chapter 7 published. I am enjoying writing this series very much and hope that readers like it too! I plan to write at least a couple more chapters. I welcome comments and suggestions where it should go next. On other websites, I have had lots of comments on my stories and it would really be appreciated if you could take some time to tell what you like and don't like about the story and perhaps how I could improve my writing skills. Thanks very much and I hope you are having a good weekend!
IMHO, this is my best chapter so far. I have invented a game for couples to play that I think you might enjoy reading about or perhaps even participating in some day. Comments are welcome.
I just had chapter three of my 'Eric the amazing massage therapist' published. The first two chapters were originally posted on another site. I wrote chapter three, the conclusion in the past few days. I re-wrote some parts of the first two, changing it to what I intended to say but wasn't allowed to on the other website. Please let me know what you think. I am open to any suggestions or comments both good and bad. Thanks!
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