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I'm redoing the start of Chapter 10 of Vengeance and I would like to find someone that is at least semi-familiar with the storyline. I'm adding in some interaction with Lilith that will shed some light on the coming chapters and plot holes.
Anyone out there interested?
Rick is actually working on it now since he watched Hockey till 1:30 this morning. It should be in the queue by early afternoon.
As usual, feedback would be appreciated...
Chapter 6 went into the queue for posting minutes ago. Chapter 7 is going in tonight (as soon as Rick can pry his ass away from the Stanley cup playoffs).
I would like some feedback on if this is going in the right direction, comments are welcome
Is going into the queue tonight. I had a question about Meredith leaning to use the new magic and it was pointed out that there were inconsistencies in the story. I hope this will fill the gaps left by my early attempts to write this story.
Enjoy, and as usual, let me know how you like it...
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