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"Indentured: a New Beginning" has consistently had the lowest Score on the Top 50 Ongoing Serials, by Weekly Downloads.
I have been advised by other writers not to turn on Voting until you have at least six chapters posted or your Score might get hammered by those readers that just read the first chapter or so and then don't come back later to reevaluate your story.
In the time between "Indentured: a New Beginning" and "Taking Ownership of Belinda" a lot has changed.
After the "Great Compromise" between the Androcratic Regime, the Equalist, and the Female Liberation Front (FLF), society was split in two worlds: the Patriarchy and the Matriarchy.
All women at 18 years old, no matter which society they were born into, decide if they will live in the Matriarchy or the Patriarchy.
If they choose the Matriarchy, they are forced to live in a women-only Reservation and are not allowed to ever leave after they made their choice.
The Reservations were set up to be self-sufficient with only Bronze Age technology. The women were given seeds for grains and vegetables, fruit trees, and animals such as chickens, goats, and sheep. The women were given bronze tools such as hoes, knives, sheep shears, etc. They were also given bronze athames for Triple Goddess rituals, and given bronze labrys for worshiping the White Goddess. The only modern technology allowed is AI-controlled Medical Centers where women are healed of any injury or illness, or to be artificially inseminated up to twice in their lifetime.
If women choose to live in the Patriarchy, they start off as free women if they were raised in the Patriarchy. They can volunteer to become slavegirls if any man agrees to be their Master. Women raised in the Matriarchy can only be slavegirls in the Patriarchy. All women in the Patriarchy, free women and slavegirls, can choose to leave the Patriarchy at any time. However, they are never allowed to return to the Patriarchy.
>Where are the children in this world? How are they raised? By whom? What are they taught about the roles of males and females?
Very good question. Tom and Katie (Cumtunnels) were recently married and have not had any children yet. They were both raised by Equalist parents. Most Equalist couples have one son and one or at most two daughters. Think of 1950's Middle America to get an idea how the Equalist children are raised (Reference "The Adventures of Ozzie and Harriet" TV show).
However, it is a different story for children raised in a Androcratic household. There is typically one son and as many daughters as possible because at 18 years old the daughters are sold off as slavegirls. It is the major source of income for lower income families. The son is raised as a little emperor and the daughters are treated as free labor (like serfs) by their father.
The Androcratic Regime controls the schools, colleges, and media. Therefore, Equalist children (boys and girls) are constantly fed Androcratic propaganda their whole childhood. All the TV shows and movies are censored of any Equalist thinking and are all very pro-Androcratic.
What they are taught about the roles of males and females in school is that males grow up to be Masters and females grow up to be slavegirls. They are also taught women are the source of all evil in the world. That it was women that almost killed off every man in the world. That it was the women that enslaved the men as sex slaves once women had taken control of the world governments. That it is the duty of all men to force all women to obey, serve, and satisfy men with the use of their orifices.
Read my Background Postings on this blog for more history of how this came about.
>My hope is that while you use a lot of creative bondage in this story I would like to see much more whipping.
On using "a lot of creative bondage and much more whipping" in stories that have slavegirls and ponygirls, I'm not sure if I should do that. It might break the willing suspension of disbelief of many of my readers, therefore causing them to cease to be immersed in the story.
Also I have been thinking of writing out all of the sex scenes and replace them with just a chaste kiss and the scene demurely fades to black when the couple makes their way to the bedroom. I think my readers will appreciate that more.
Mua! ha! ha!
I have been asked why John's club was named the "Cow-Cunts Are Livestock Too!" in "Indentured: a New Beginning".
I held off answering until Chapter 25 was posted.
John wants to run a humane cow-cunt ranch, and wants the Pre-Crisis laws that are still on the books for treating livestock humanely to be enforced with regards to cow-cunts.
The Charter for the "Cow-Cunts Are Livestock Too!" club states:
Since cow-cunts are livestock too, they are to be provided with humane care and treatment during transportation, purchase, sale, housing, care, and handling. Also a cow-cunt is to be completely sedated and insensible to pain when being disposed of.
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