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In 1980, a plump, plain girl transforms herself into a "punk queen," or so she thinks. As part of her new image, she lands a slightly older, and somewhat nerdy, boyfriend. Their sexual hi-jinks in the various buildings her dad maintains get her old man's attention. He decides it's time to rein her in (and get rid of her horny boyfriend) by applying the old-fashioned "rod of correction" to the "naughty backsides" of both of them.

This may be short, no more than four chapters, but it's very difficult to be sure. The first chapter is at a New Jersey office building in the late 1980's. The first sex scene takes place in there. There are ways to get away with events like that. The building itself, with its one floor that is half-empty, is based on one I worked in. The events depicted in there are entirely fictional, however.

Also, I think can write a last chapter that will finish the Paradise Theater series which was ended without a true resolution. I rewrote parts of it on another site, especially the first two chapters, that gave me clues as to how to end it here. However, that will probably be a couple of months from now at best. I also will not replace any of the existing chapters here.

In his first month in high school in 1969, Hank spends an increasing amount of time with his unexpected new girlfriend Arlene. During that period, he does not travel out to New Jersey to be with his mature lover Molly whom he met a couple of months earlier. On the surface, everything seems to be going well, but Hank realizes that his youth and inexperience are hindrances to him handling two women at the same time.

"The Soul of an Immoral Woman." Actually, he's continually led stray by his young, skeptical (of Catholicism among other things) parishioner Ellen. However, he admits that he has given into her charms since the very beginning. Here, she plays the role of a difficult but kinky middle-aged woman and they both enjoy it. She sticks to authenticity and abruptly leaves when they are done, leaving him to wonder what her eventually intentions about him will be.