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There will probably be additional chapters beyond this one, but I need time to think about what will be next.
It took a while, but the second chapter is out. A month into their affair, Steve and Alisa finally get to some kinky activities.
It took a while for me to figure out how to end this. It struck me that the plot is similar to Summer of ’42, although this takes place over several months rather than in one evening. As in that story, the age difference between the two protagonists here is a major issue.
After all of these years, there is still a diner on the southeast corner of 181st Street and Fort Washington Avenue, although the name is different now.
In 1980, a plump, plain girl transforms herself into a "punk queen," or so she thinks. As part of her new image, she lands a slightly older, and somewhat nerdy, boyfriend. Their sexual hi-jinks in the various buildings her dad maintains get her old man's attention. He decides it's time to rein her in (and get rid of her horny boyfriend) by applying the old-fashioned "rod of correction" to the "naughty backsides" of both of them.
This may be short, no more than four chapters, but it's very difficult to be sure. The first chapter is at a New Jersey office building in the late 1980's. The first sex scene takes place in there. There are ways to get away with events like that. The building itself, with its one floor that is half-empty, is based on one I worked in. The events depicted in there are entirely fictional, however.
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