Dark Paladin: Blog

For those who are following along, Chapter 4 is now in the queue and will likely be up soon for readers.

Like it? Don't like it? Have a good recipe to share? Let me know.

As those of you who have been following along, No More Whores Redux is a rewrite of another work. The chapter I'm working on I feel should be split into two parts - but it may mean that chapters 4 and 5 are shorter than what's been come before.

A quality versus quantity issue? Well, only if you consider this stroke story to be any kind of quality at all. But for those who are following along, I'm going to be posting the next chapter sometime Saturday-ish. For the readers, which would you prefer:

A chapter that focuses on one scenario at a time, or

Honor the original outline and lump as much as possible?

Feel free to send me a note. Thanks to everyone's feedback so far. And yes I'll work on Invention II sometime for those who keep asking....

As promised, I now have submitted Chapter 3 for posting. If you like it, let me know. Have suggestions or ideas? Fire off. I might use it or not. Complaints? Heck I'll fix problems if you find them.

Based on my emails, my rewrite of No More Whores Redux is going rather well with some of you out there. And here are some questions answered:

"Will there be more chapters?"

Yes. I just finished writing up the last one, and should post it on the weekend or so.

"How many will there be?"

I haven't decided yet. No more than I feel are needed, but no less than I desire. Sometimes I consider a new chapter, other times I feel too long will be rather ridiculous. After all, how many girls can one man violate?

"What about The Invention II?"

Ah. I haven't forgotten about that. I've been through some - interesting times over the years, and I lost a lot of things. But the ideas for how that story ends is still in my head. Perhaps getting NMW out of my skull will help me return to that tale and finish it.

"I have pictures of my sister/daughter/niece to share with you! For inspiration!"

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I've submitted No More Whores Redux 2 for submission. Thank you to the people who have voted and sent me emails. If there are mistakes - blame me, but let me know. If you have suggestions, throw them my way.