Dark Paladin: Blog

I'm considering recording audio versions of a few of my works - perhaps starting with "The Feel" or "The Invention". Just out of curiosity, has anyone had any appeal with that? I can see how some people might like it for "hands free" enjoyment, but there's something about the ability to easily rescroll to your favorite parts of a story to reread that passage that gets you off as being fun.

Comments?

First - the good news! Chapter 13, after almost a decade hiatus, is pretty much ready to go!

Second - the bad news! You won't see it for awhile. I don't want to get stuck writing a chapter and then rushing, so *all* of Invention II will be done before I post so much as one sentence to the site. How long? Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I don't know. In my head, there's likely another 10-15 chapters depending on length. There's going to be some major WHAT and OMG and YOU SUCK moments coming up. I consider it to be mostly a stroke story - but hopefully one with some unusual elements (the fact you have an indian girl who sprouted a penis after losing her virginity has to have some people wondering).

Third - the editing call. I've received several brave volunteers, and I've sent most of them copies of the work so far. And - really only one has responded back. I'm not stressed, because thanks to Zen Master he's given me some excellent feedback. But like all things, you get 100 people saying "Me me me!" and maybe one gets back with "Oh here's your reply."

Either way, I'll try to fix up mistakes in the previous chapters before I post the new ones. If I have my way, but the new year. No promises.

I'm honestly ok with the response so far. It's a non-paying gig to read about sexy girls being stripped naked while their bodies are flooded with a mind control system to make them so hot and horny they can hardly think of anything but sex. I mean - who'd *want* to read about that?

DP

Perhaps less editor than proof reader - I'm working on the next chapter of Invention II and need someone to look it over. Volunteers? Non-paying position save in arousal.

Big thanks to CoullPert who sent me the various typos from "No More Whores Redux" - they're all fixed it up so hopefully it won't interrupt your fapping pleasure next time.

I started work on the next chapter of Invention II. It's been so long, and I've been through so much, and honestly things in my life are crappy but hey - at least I can still write something, hm?

Here's my current plan:

1. I'm going to write up Invention II. All of it, every single piece.

2. Along the way I'll request help from the community or an editor so I don't have the mistakes here and there that can plague a story.

3. I'll set up a Patreon account - those who throw in a few bucks can get the chapters a week before everyone else, but more importantly can give me the ability to write more often. I don't need much, but if I was making say $1000 from all donations a month, I'd do this full time. Yeah, my life is that simple now.

4. While Invention II posts chapter by chapter, I can work on other story ideas and give you the ability to vote on which one to tackle next. A time travel redo story called "To Sup with a Long Spoon" where a man sells his soul to the devil so he can redo his life? Or a story from a girl's point of view where the older man she's in love with seems to have his sights set on having every other girl *but* her?

That's just a sampling. Anyway - give me feedback. Work something out. And have some fun.

DP

For "No More Whores Redux" anyway. I finished it - later than I wanted, real life got into the way but hey that's just how it goes.

I know people are wanting me to get back to "Invention II", and if I'll write more. I'll try - I think with "No More Whores Redux" out of my head I have space to go back to "Invention II." But I do have another "older guy with younger girls" story rattling around "Getting Mr. Johnson", so maybe we can see both occur.

Either way. We'll just have to see.