Dark Paladin: Blog

Every so often I get into a mood for a specific story, so I go into my bookmarks.

And every so often - it vanishes.

I don't remember the name. I'm pretty sure it was 3 chapters long, and it was about a father getting into a chat group with what he believes is a stranger. Turns out, it's his daughter. Her friends encourage her until she winds up in an incestuous relationship with him.

What really got me going was the twist in the story. Daughter has a sleepover, he's sleeping in bed, one of the girls comes into his bedroom, he thinks it's his birth control using daughter so he takes the young girl's virginity -

And there you have it pregnant teenager and he gets to have her after she's knocked up. It ended with the possibility of him having another one of the girls.

And it's no longer in my bookmarks, likely removed some time ago by the author for whatever reason. Too bad. I rather enjoyed it.

I'm typing it out now, tapping at the keys as I work out how things will go. Usually I have the barest outline - just a few notes of things I know will occur, whether it be positions, or phrases, or a girl in particular.

I know I'm reaching the end, and so I've been looking back at Invention II. It's sat there for years and I know where it's going to go. I think the hardest part has just been getting the time between work and family and so on and so forth to get it done.

The life of an erotic author can be a lonely one. It's not like you can tell people "Oh what do I like to do in my spare time? Well sometimes I write up stories about girls being seduced, or raped, or impregnated, or some combination of the three." Not exactly stuff you can bring out at a party as you discuss philosophy.

I plan 3 more chapters in this retelling of No More Whores. I'm hoping to get back to Invention II after that, but it depends on how things go.

Sorry for the delay. Life happens and it's a short chapter. The next one should be longer and perhaps very interesting.

So. Chapter 5 is up, with more debauchery from our hero. I'm thinking there will be about another 5 more chapters. That will cover all of the scenes that I want to get out from my head.

One thing I've been dealing with is how the original went as opposed to my version. The author never mentions ages, and neither do I - so you can fill in your own gaps. The last chapter of the original seemed to feature a girl younger than the others - so much that she's being "babysat", so - that's where it gets harder and harder to use the "I didn't mention any names" system.

I think I've figured out a way around that. We'll see how it goes, but that will be the last chapter of this saga, unless I come up with some other scene that I've wanted to get out.

DP